Journal | Article writing homework help

Choose one piece of writing to practice with the style principles we have been studying this week. You are welcome to use your current draft of the contribution paper that you have been working on or something from other classes.

This assignment has three parts:

For each part you will choose a sentence or section from your chosen piece of writing. For parts 1 and 2, include the original and the edited product. Notice how you change each sentence and how it helps the meaning of your writing become more clear, concise, readable, or persuasive.

1. Choose two sentences from your piece of writing. Identify the agent in each sentence. Edit each sentence to make the grammatical subject the same as the agent. After you have finished, now edit the both sentences a second time to be in passive voice.

2. Choose the longest sentence that you can find in your piece of writing. Use Chapter 12 on Sentence Clarity and Conciseness to edit this sentence. Identify the agent of the sentence and make it clear. Get rid of unnecessary words.

3. Think through the editing work you have done. Write a few paragraphs addressing the edits. How does making the agent more clear change the sentence? How does changing the sentence to passive voice change the meaning? tone? clarity? Does one of your sentences make more sense in passive voice? What patterns did you see as you were looking for sentences to edit? To you write long/complex sentences? Do you use a lot of passive voice? Is there anything else you’ve noticed about your writing style?

Calculate the price of your order

Choose an academic level, add pages, and the paper type you want.
To reduce the cost of our essay writing services, select the lengthier deadline.
We can't believe we just said that to you.

550 words
We'll send you the first draft for approval by September 11, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Total price:
$26
The price is based on these factors:
Academic level
Number of pages
Urgency
Basic features
  • Free title page and bibliography
  • Unlimited revisions
  • Plagiarism-free guarantee
  • Money-back guarantee
  • 24/7 support
On-demand options
  • Writer’s samples
  • Part-by-part delivery
  • Overnight delivery
  • Copies of used sources
  • Expert Proofreading
Paper format
  • 275 words per page
  • 12 pt Arial/Times New Roman
  • Double line spacing
  • Any citation style (APA, MLA, Chicago/Turabian, Harvard)

Our guarantees

Delivering a high-quality product at a reasonable price is not enough anymore.
That’s why we have developed 5 beneficial guarantees that will make your experience with our service enjoyable, easy, and safe.

Money-back guarantee

You have to be 100% sure of the quality of your product to give a money-back guarantee. This describes us perfectly. Make sure that this guarantee is totally transparent.

Read more

Zero-plagiarism guarantee

Each paper is composed from scratch, according to your instructions. It is then checked by our plagiarism-detection software. There is no gap where plagiarism could squeeze in.

Read more

Free-revision policy

Thanks to our free revisions, there is no way for you to be unsatisfied. We will work on your paper until you are completely happy with the result.

Read more

Privacy policy

Your email is safe, as we store it according to international data protection rules. Your bank details are secure, as we use only reliable payment systems.

Read more

Fair-cooperation guarantee

By sending us your money, you buy the service we provide. Check out our terms and conditions if you prefer business talks to be laid out in official language.

Read more

Why is Purdue Papers the Most Helpful Essay Writing Service for You?

  1. Custom-written and plagiarism-free papers: Our authors create their work from scratch. Before presenting them to clients, we routinely verify them for signs of plagiarism. Our quality assurance group also double-checks and fixes any grammatical errors, assuring that all of our authors adhere to the same standards of writing.
  2. The significance of timely delivery cannot be overstated, and we consistently strive to meet or exceed our clients' deadlines. Regardless of the short time frame, you can count on our writers to get the job done. We always have a team of writers ready to go, even if the deadline is only six hours away.
  3. Customer Satisfaction: Our customer service representatives are the best in the business and have a wealth of knowledge in dealing with clients. All our customer service representatives are trained to listen and reply promptly until you are satisfied with their service. To ensure you're happy, our expert writers will strictly follow the criteria to generate a special report. Our customer service may be contacted by chat, email, or phone. In addition, we provide round-the-clock assistance to all of our clients.
  4. Confidentiality: Our systems are safe, and your information is always protected. We're constantly looking for new facts when it comes to finishing your work. We use a safe and secure payment channel. Since our ordering process is completely anonymous, you don't have to provide any credit card information to place a purchase with us.
  5. Highly Trained Authors: Our writers have received extensive training and are committed to delivering only the best papers. They are fluent in APA, MLA, HARVARD, IEEE, CHICAGO, and AMA referencing styles. To meet your expectations, our skilled writers always pay close attention to your instructions.
  6. Lowered prices: We have set prices that are already discounted. Our prices are the best and affordable for all our esteemed customers.

Let Professionals Take Care of your Academic Paper